Thursday 11 June 2020

The lighthouse

In Te kahu we have been learning creative writing and one of the task was to watch short film and describe the short film. I think I did good.





HAVE YOU EVER DONE CREATIVE WRITING ?

2 comments:

  1. Good work Milin, next time I want you to work on adding more descriptive language to describe what is happening.

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    1. Ok whaea Danni I will add more descriptive language next time Thanks

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