Tuesday, 23 July 2019

My holiday

I saw the victory sign as I quickly jumped
out of My chair and started clapping. 


I felt my hand getting more slippery and
slippery each game I played because the
games were getting harder and harder.


I wanted how long my mum would let to
tonight and in that time frame I was
hoping to get a win.


I heard other people trying to come into my
fortnite how to raid it.

I smelled the lovely food my amazing
mum cooked for us. She cooked us mice
and bread.

What was your Holiday like ? 

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora. I am Maranga from Matawai School.
    I really like how you put powerful words into your holiday writing.
    I learnt that you m,ade a chart to record your blog post.
    Maybe you could tell a question in your writing maybe.
    How did you create you google slide animation.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Maranga

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