In class I've been doing some haiku's. The rules for haiku are 5,7,5 syllables.
Here are mine...
I love sporty things
like rugby and basket ball
It is really fun.
Tree are amazing
Tree make you breathe every day.
They are pretty cool.
HAVE YOU MADE A HAIKU?
Kia ora,Millin! I'm Ruby-Rhain from Matawai School.
ReplyDeleteI really loved this because of you've explained what a haiku is. This gave me a memory of when I did my haiku when I was a little girl. Despite that It was a little hard for me.
Maybe you could add some adjectives (If you could) or make it a bit descriptive.
And also, do you like writing haikus like these?
Thank you for reading my comment!
From Ruby-Rhain
HI Ruby-Rhain thank you for commenting and giving me something to work on. Yes I do like writing haiku's because they are not very long and they are not that short either.
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